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CH:6

It was about 8 o´clock, she laid awake in bed, next to him and waited that him to wake up. She looked at him and thought what could happen when she would wake him up now, she knew that he didn´t liked that, but suddenly she shakes her head a bit and looked a bit irritated.
~ why I care what he does when he wake up… I don´t…. care,,, about him anymore… or?.. NO… definitely NO…~, she thought, then she looks to her body next to her. She sat up and begins to shake him on his shoulders, slightly. "Sasuke, wake up… I can´t go to the bathroom, when you still sleep!", she said.
An slightly irritated looking Sasuke looked at her, still sleepy. He yawned a first.
"Then go, I think you find it on your own…", he said and turn around.
"You are good… have you forgotten the chain?", *she pulls on it and he felt his hand moving in her direction.
"Fine!", he said a bit annoyed and raised up. She let the chain fall again and raised up too, goes next to him. He walks outside then, in the direction of the bathroom. She follows him.
As they arrived there he looks at her. She says suddenly: "Ok, you wait here, I go inside."
He simply nod, and felt suddenly that his arm moved to the door, because of the chain, she pulls after her as she goes inside.
She closes the door with the chain between the door and the wall, suddenly she hears her voice from the outside: "The chain isn´t long enough… you break.. your, or now my arm… when you go on!"
She looks to the door, pulls on the chain and hears a louder: "Hey!"
She sighs and goes back to the door and opens it, she pulls him after herself, and closes the door after them. "Good, then… turn away…", she said.
"he smirks abit: "Hey, that is my body… I know how it looks like and so o-"
"Turn away!", she said louder.
He sighs: "Ok… but… when you need help… say… something"
She turns her head to him, his beackside as he said that, she was surprised.
~seeems, something of the good old Sasuke is still inside …~, he notice suddenly that she smiles a bit, but then she shakes her head, and looks normal again.
"What are you doing, I thought you had to use it so urgent…"
She sighs and use the toilette, meanwhile she don´t want to look down, after that shegoes and washs her hand, he turns to her, and as they look in the mirror they see themselves satnding next to each other, for both it felt strange, especially that they standing together without blaming each other or looking to serious.  In that moment they couldn´t tell who is who, because in the mirror they couldn´t see the inner changes, the body switch…
But suddenly it knocks on the closed door. "Good morning you 2… I would like it when one of you opens the door, that I can use the bathroom too", madaras´s voice said.
Karin looks at the door and opens it, she looks at the masked man: "Such a big hideout and only one bathroom?... "
"Yes, and that is the shortest way to one, another one is on the other end… but why I tell you, I only wanted to tell you that the training starts In 1 hour…"
Sasuke nods and goes outside the bathroom, he pulls Karin a bit after him for a moment.
"see you two!", he said and closes the door of the bathroom.
"We should go… eat something…", Sasuke said and walked in the direction of the kitchen. She follows him.
chapter 6 PART 1, i hope you like it... part 2 will be submitted tonight (dammit sharing my lappy-.-)

(C) characters by M.Kishimoto
(c) crazy FF by me XD
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Ahhahaha! bathroom wars!!!
Like it, very funny!