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POINT OF VIEW





Prolog
It was midnight, as Karin starred on the wall of her cell, she thought about the happenings and still felt a kind of rage, thinking on what HE said, after he stabbed her together with danzou, the words followed her in her head in a kind of echo. A sights came out of her mouth, closed her eyes, tried to think on something else, but that was quite hard. She turned around on the divan bed.
~ I really should forget him, I should think foreward… ~ , she thought, but then the words appeared in her head again. Suddenly she opend her eyes and said to in an slightly angry sound:
"I wished you could see only one time through my eyes… and see what you became… Sasuke!", then she sighted again, and closed her eyes, tried to sleep…

CHAPTER 1
Shikamaru knocks on Naruto´s door of the wood-style house, in which Naruto lives currently. He seems to be a bit out of character: "Naruto! Wake up and open the door!!!" , he knocks louder. After a while he hears him opening the door, a very sleepy Naruto looks on him: "What do you want? … It is very early, and I haven't a mission today?", he says sleepy.
"dress on and follow me, hurry a bit!", Shikamaru says only. Naruto looks at him asking: "What the hell is that urgent? … Have you found Sasuke or a trail to him?"
"Might be… but now come.", Shikamaru replied only.
After hearing that Naruto seemed to be more alive suddenly, ran inside, dress on and runs back to Shikamaru. In that moment Naruto is suddenly the one who sees that urgent.
"Hey, wait Naruto!", he follows him, "you don´t know where to go, right?, I haven´t told you…"
Naruto looks at him suddenly: "Right, but…I can imagine you got some information from the girl named Karin, or?"
Shikamaru looks at him serious: "Your half right… she said something… but these are not such information you imagine."
Naruto looks at him asking: "And which kind of information then?"
"It is difficult to explain… we simply should go there, you should see it with your own eyes…"
This sentence made Naruto thinking, that sounded weired, and he had suddenly a strange feeling. It was only a few days after the meeting at the bridge gone.

As they arrived at the new temporary base of the jail and torture cell, Naruto noticed that the place was watched by ANBU. He looked around a bit wondering, ~ I don´t think that Karin is that dangerous that ANBU must be here… ~ , he thought, following Shikamaru inside. After a while they reached a door. Shikamaru opend it without saying a word. Naruto followed him, the strange feeling begun to be stronger. As he was gone inside he saw Karin, sitting on a table, she had closed her eyes and had the elbows on the table, back her chin on her hands. This scene reminded in on someone, but in this moment he wouldn´t think on such things.
"Karin, what have you for information about Sasuke! Tell me!", he says through the whole room.
Karin opened her eyes, looks at him. He looks at her, he looks a bit skeptical, he knew this look too, but not from Karin.
"What is now… why do you looking at me like…"
Karin´s sights breaks up his sentence: "Shut up, idiot!", she said cold, looks to Shikamaru: "why you have informed him?"
"Because it is urgent, and look at yourself traitor…", Shikamaru replied to Karin.
Naruto felt like he was in the wrong movie. He looked at Shikamaru and then at Karin. "What the hell is going on here? … and why she is so.. so.. cold suddenly, she reminds me on-"
"Sasuke Uchiha!... yes, so it is.", Shikamaru finished his sentence. Naruto stares at him without saying anything. He looks at Karin. Suddenly he begins to laugh a bit: "I understand… you 2  kidding me…", he laughs a bit on, till Shikamaru says something again: "No, that isn´t a joke… I thought it is one too… but it don´t seems so…  since a few hours she behaves like him…. That is a mystery why, but test herself… or better himself." Shikamaru looks at Karin.
Naruto seems still not believing this: "But why are you so sure, we don´t know her personality right, perhaps it is normal for her?"
"You are such an idiot… still", it came from the Karin looking Sasuke, "I havn´t any clue, why that happened, as I awoke, I found myself here… in her body…", karins voice says calm and coldly. She looks at Shikamaru: "What will happen now?"
"I don´t know, the hokage and the 2 elders decide such things…", shikamaru replied. As he said that the gaze of karins face turned hatefully. "these 2 elders, you can tell them that I will kill them without any mercy when they appear before my eyes."
Naruto watched that talk: " But Ka- Sasuke…"
Suddenly her gaze looks on him: "They will pay for that, no matter what… and you all 2…  Konoha will not exist in the future, it will vanish from this world!"
Naruto looked at him, he never had thought such things can happen, and that Sasuke could appear before him not looking like he normally do, but the personality was exactly the same…
" yes yes… ", Shikamaru said, sights then, turns around.
"But Shikamaru, how much people know from that incident?", Naruto asked suddenly. Shikamaru looks at him: "Not much, it is very early and-"
"Please don´t tell anyone about that then…!", he said louder. Shikamaru looks at him: "But you can´t…" , he sighed, "don´t you think that a blind one can see that she isn´t herself?!"
"Please Shikamaru, I think I can… "
"You only don´t want that they punish him now, right?!", he sighed again. Naruto still looks at him.
"Ok… I will… try to… but you will only have a few hours or days more, before it comes out, that she is he, in the moment…. "
Naruto smiles: "thank you, Shikamaru."
"That won´t help you… I can´t understand you…", she (Karin-looking Sasuke) , said suddenly. She turns away from them: "I can´t hear that anymore…. Friendship… and such things….", she says slightly annoyed.

Far away meanwhile…
Madara was going to look after Sasuke, and how he felt now with the eyes of his brother, he wanted even to tell, perhaps train him a bit in using this new power. He walks inside the room, where Sasuke still seems to sleep: "You should wake up, … how are you today, and your eyes?", he asked by siting down on a chair.
~ what, this voice… it sounds familiar… I heared it before… ~ , he opens his eyes. Sit in bed then, looks at him, suddenly the eyes widen a bit more: "You?!... what is…", he looks around, then back to Madara. "Where I am? …"
Behind his mask Madara is a bit skeptical: "you behaive strange…  what do you mean with "where I am", have you forgotten that we retreated and I gave you Itachi´s eyes, you wanted them because of escaping the darkness and get eternal Mangekyou Sharingan… ", Madara explained.
He looks at him with an untypical confused face expression, the he looks on his hand and then on his chest. "What the hell!", he (Sasuke looking Karin)says suddenly, looks "what the hell is the meaning of that? … that must be a dream….", he nip himself in his arm.
Madara don´t says something he simply watches that scene, he can only think a bit. ~ what is with him suddenly…. He isn´t himself… it is like…. That is only his body… but not his soul… ~
"have you something to do with that?!", he asked him.
"No, I can´t understand it myself…. But when you are not Sasuke… who you are then?" ~ and why you are exactly in his body.. ~ , Madara says and thinks.
"I am the burden you wanted to lose… remember?!", he says suddenly.
"Oh, your that girl… from Sasuke team?!", he says… , "I should better ask you, why you suddenly in his body? … and when you are in his, than is the chance high that he is in yours….", he says… "what a trouble…. Now I must think on a way to get him back… or… I must train you…. "
"what?!", he says…

To be continued…
my first sasukarin FF... chapter 1 and prolog, i am sorry for some english mistakes... and i hope it is half-way interesting... ^^"
i wanted them to see the world out of the view of each other, that is a really diffrent one... hope it is interesting xD

comment and kritik is welcome

read on:
CH:2 part 1 [link]
CH:2 part 2 [link]
CH:3 part 1 [link]
CH:3 part 2 [link]
CH:3 part 3 [link]
CH:4 part 1 [link]
CH:4 part 2 [link]
CH:4 part 3 ...


... to be continued

(C) naruto charas by M-Kishimoto
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i Really Enjoy Reading This =D ..